Writing task 01
The chart illustrates the data on the different ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy projections for in 2000 and 2050.
To begin with, age limit 15-59 always achieved the highest portion among the other age limits in both years. Approximately it was in the range little bit less than 50% or more than 50%. Moreover, In Yemen 60+ age group got the least percentages while the Italy took it as 0-14 age group.
Furthermore, in 2050 Yemen percentages in group 60+ got a slight increase than 2000.In figures it was 3.6% to 5.7%. Although the age group 0-14 got 50.1% for projection in 2000, in 2050 it changed to 37%. However the opposite happed to age group in 15-59years it was increased up to 57.3% from 46.3%.In addition to that In Italy 60+years took quarter of the pie but in 2050 it increased almost half of the pie.
Overall, in 2050 both countries achieved highest percentages for age limit 15-59.
Sentence: The chart illustrates the data on the different ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy projections for in 2000 and 2050.
Description: The token for is not usually followed by a preposition
Suggestion: Refer to for and in
Sentence: However the opposite happed to age group in 15-59years it was increased up to 57.3 from 46.3.In addition to that In Italy 60years took quarter of the pie but in 2050 it increased almost half of the pie.
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.584 4.0
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