Writing Task 1
The chart provided illustrates the percentage petrol consuming of people in two different countries (the United States and the United Kingdom).
Over all, it can be said that the total money expandature for petrol in the United Kingdom is majority for the richest people. In other hand, it is the highest for poorest in the United States.
At the first, the poorest in the United Kingdom use their money income for about 0,5 % in petrol. Then, the need of petrol increased for about 2,9 % - 3,9 % for the middle class people. Its total amount of middle income is almost similar with the richest people in the United Kingdom.
In the United States, however, the total money of poorest people is more than other classes. The poorest people pay over 5 % of their budget out for petrol. While the other classes (middle and richest people)use their money just under 5 %.
Sentence: Over all, it can be said that the total money expandature for petrol in the United Kingdom is majority for the richest people.
Error: petrol Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: expandature Suggestion: expenditure
Sentence: While the other classes middle and richest peopleuse their money just under 5 .
Error: peopleuse Suggestion: people use
flaws:
No. of Words: 148 200
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.444 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.531 7.5
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 148 200
No. of Characters: 684 1000
No. of Different Words: 69 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.488 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.622 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.103 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 55 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 26 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 10 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 8 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.444 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.531 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.444 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.497 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.707 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.165 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4