Yesterday was wedding anniversary. Therefore, you gave surprise to your mate (husband/wife)
1.Write your answer in a paragraph well
2.Make at least 2 Supporting Sentence
3.Underline its Topic Sentence, Supporting Sentence and Conclusion Statement
Being planned for 6 months, I made a fantastic surprise for my wife during our wedding anniversary. At first, she was curious to someone who knocked the door at 10.00 PM. I was waiting at the front door with a plate of decorative cake and candles, since we celebrated our 10th anniversary, formed number 10 on it. As she opened the door and saw what I am holding, she was unable to say even a word. My wife was totally surprised with my arrival without any notification. What she knew, I was on duty for accomplishing a project in a remote area for 9 months in length. Without doing much conversatio...
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Avg. Sentence Length: 14.714 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.457 7.5
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 206 200
No. of Characters: 878 1000
No. of Different Words: 133 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.788 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.262 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.487 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 54 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 41 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 5.457 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.357 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.215 0.07
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