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You and your family are living in a rented accommodation in an English speaking country. you are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.Write a letter to the landlord. I your letter- introduce yourself- explain what is wrong with the fu


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You and your family are living in a rented accommodation in an English speaking country. you are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to the landlord. I your letter - introduce yourself - explain what is wrong with the furniture - say what action would you like the landlord to take

Sir,

I am a tenant of your apartment situated on the ABC avenue, which I had rented from you last spring.

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with a particular piece of furniture that has been provided in the apartment. The sofa set is in a dismal condition. The seat cushions are in a poor state. The cushions seem to have disintegrated to such an extent that the springs are now visible. It is practically impossible to sit on two of the seats as the springs seem to dig into the back. Also the sofa cloth is old and faded. The sofa covers provided are moldy and moths seem to have eaten away at them over the years making them full of holes now. The frame of th ...

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