You are living near a public park and the condition of this park is getting worse than before. Write a letter to the park management and say:
- Why are you interested in this park?
- What are the problems you are facing?
- What are your suggestions for improvement?
Hello
My name is Anne Dikson. I Live in fifth avenue in central park vicinity. I often go to this park in evening with my child and my husband. All of us like this park because it is big and green with various trees , amazing lake with beautiful swans, fresh weather and it ‘s facilities.
There is a amuzement park in this park. Children paly there all day long. Today is Sunday and i went to park in the morning. I have a child that is very playful. She also play with toys in park every day. Today she is rising from slide that her hand damaged with a branch. I don’t know how many of...
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Sentence: There is a amuzement park in this park.
Error: amuzement Suggestion: amusement
Sentence: Children paly there all day long.
Error: paly Suggestion: play
Sentence: I don't know how many of children hurt with trees of near amuzement park daily.
Error: amuzement Suggestion: amusement
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