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The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The graphs present the number of computer owners as a percentage of population (the first graph) and a percentage of an educational level (the second graph) group during the period from the 2002 to 2010.
Firstly, the steady rise of the amount of computer owners can be at both graphs. The computer ownership in total rose from less then 60 per cent in 2002 to about 75 per cent in 2010. The second graph is divided into 5 levels of education (no high school diploma, high school graduate, incomplete college, bachelor's degree and postgraduate degree). What is interesting, a significant rise occ...
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Different Words: 123 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.89 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.847 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 81 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 52 50
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.066 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4