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The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.
Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
Write at least 150 words.
The bar compares the predicted sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. It is clear from the chart that the highest amount of sales are expected towards the end of the year.
Although sale in Jack and Jane Co is expected be about 450,000 pairs in January, it will dramatically decrease by about 200,000 pairs in February. However, over the next four months of the period the sales of jeans for this company is anticipated to rise steadily from about 200,000 pairs to just over 400,000 and level off at that level between July and August. Over the last quarter of the next year, sales a...
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