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The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.
Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart shows the estimated sales of jeans in thousands of pairs for two companies in Turkey next year.
The most striking feature is that sales of jeans at Mango Co. Will rise from approximately 150.000 pairs in January to about 500.000 pairs in August and it will remain there until November. For December sales of jeans are expected about 600.000 pairs.
Meanwhile, the sales of jeans at Jack & Jones Co. Decrease from around 450.000 pairs in January to about 250.000 pairs in February. But then, it will rise to around 400.000 pairs in June and it will remain there until August. Moreover, it will increase to approximately 400.000 pairs in December.
The pie chart shows projected market share for Mango Co., Jack & Jones Co., and others are 20%, 30%, and 50% respectively.
All in all, general trends for Mango Co. and Jack & Jones Co. estimated sales will fall from January to February, but then will rise between February and December next year.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 164 200
No. of Characters: 764 1000
No. of Different Words: 79 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.579 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.659 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.264 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 44 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 34 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 21 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 9 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.714 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.375 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.52 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.826 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.222 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4