You stayed at your friends’ house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room.Task: Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.

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You stayed at your friends’ house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room.
Task: Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am sorry I am writing now. I am writing to thank you for your wonderful hosting. I had a great time in your house. During the past days I realized, I had lost one of my files. I searched for it everywhere, but I could not find it. Suddenly, I remembered the last day I was in your home. Do you remember this day? When I was packing my stuff, you came and asked me about a red file that I put on the table. I said I would put it on my hand bag. As you can see, I forgot do to that. The file contains all seminars' documents, my notebooks and my report.

I will be very grateful, if you send me this file by post. You have my currently address, right? I must give this file to my boss. If I do not do it in until next Monday, I will be punished.

With best wishes, Mari.

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No. of Sentences: 15 9
No. of Words: 157 200
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No. of Different Words: 95 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.54 4.7
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Word Length SD: 2.124 2.4
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 3.775 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.511 0.50
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