Your find that your study load is too heavy Write a letter to your college teacher explaining why you need to withdraw from two courses Ask if it is possible to obtain a refund You should write at least 150 words You should spend about 20 minutes on this

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Your find that your study load is too heavy. Write a letter to your college teacher explaining why you need to withdraw from two courses. Ask if it is possible to obtain a refund.
You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Dear Prof. James,

I am writing to formally request to withdraw from two courses: Introduction to Elementary Education (EDU602) and Teaching Methods (EDU 619)
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The main reason for reducing my course load is that I am finding it extremely difficult to manage six courses. In the beginning of the term, I was perhaps overly optimistic about juggling both my full time studies and my part time job (20 hours/week). Because I really must work part time, I have no other choice but to decrease my course load. I am planning on taking the two courses during the summer semester, if they are available, so that I will be able to complete all the courses for the degree program by the following year.

I would also like to request a tuition refund, and hope I am not too late to receive the full reimbursement. I am sorry for any inconveniences I have caused by this change in plans. This decision was not taken lightly, and I do appreciate the kind consideration you have shown to me.

Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me at 277-9144. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely yours,

Anya

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Score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 202 200
No. of Characters: 891 1000
No. of Different Words: 134 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.77 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.411 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.592 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 62 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 46 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 27 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.364 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.474 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.455 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.411 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.655 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.214 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4