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Part I

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6.5 out of 9

two 'therefor' again

Dear Sir,

Dear Sir,
It seems that I have a problem with the first part.
- there are some problems with hesitations
-repeated words.
may you point at other problems?

thank you

One more issue is that You

One more issue is that You like to use 'therefor' means you want to make a conclusion, which is not necessary in part I. Just need to bring two general reasons.

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6.5 out of 9

Dear Sir,

One more issue is that You

Thank you.