The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.
Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar diagram illustrates the expected volumes of jeans sold in Turkish market for Mango and Jack & Jones, whilst the second graph compares the forecasted market share of 2015 for the two firms.
As can be seen from the first graph, the quantities of jeans expected to be sold by Jack & Jones are generally higher than that of Mango Co.. It is estimated that Jack & Jones could sell just under 500 thousands of pairs of jeans in January, whereas Mango would sell only around 150 thousands of pairs. Both firms are forecasted to experience some fluctuations in gross revenue over the year. Mango i...
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