The chart below give information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2016, and future projection of 2025.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart below give information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2016, and future projection of 2025.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The multiple bar chart highlights about Scoutland's main exports divided into three different sectors in 2000, 2016, and predictable calculation for 2025.

In 2000, the international tourism was the highest export sector stood at 8 billion, while the dairy product in the second position at 7 billion, and meat product become the lowest at 6 billion. Whilst, there are some significant changes in 2016 when the number of dairy product overtakes the international tourism to 10 billion while international tourism stands at 9 billion. The meat product remains in the last order which is also steadily decreasing in this year into 5.5 billion.

In 2025, the international tourism is predicted to be the greatest main export and it will achieve 10 billion. While the dairy product will slightly decline into 9.5 billion and also meet product to 5 billion.

In sum up, there will be an upward trend in the future, where the international tourism - which was the trend in the 2000 - will surpass the number of dairy product - as the trend in 2016 - in the 2025. Meanwhile, the meat product will remain the last.

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the international tourism was the highest export sector stood at 8 billion,
the international tourism was the highest export sector which stood at 8 billion,

and meat product become the lowest at 6 billion.
and meat product becomes the lowest at 6 billion.

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