The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The diagram gives information about weekly cost of spending money on fast foods in the UK and three types of income, while the line graph illustrates the weight of fast foods which are consumed by people between 1970 and 1990
Overall, it can be seen that humburger has the highest income and more average income than fish and chips or pizza, whereas fish and chips are consumed by the majority of people.
We can see on the diagram, that the high income group have spent most of their money on hamburgers, spending around £45 per week. In contrast, the low income group spent less than a third of that figure on hamburgers.Fish and chips were mostly consumed by the average income group with £25 spent weekly. The type of food least consumed was pizza with less than £40 spent weekly by all groups combined.
From the line graph, it is clear that there was a steady decline in the munbers of weight from 300 grams to 200 grams during 20 years. However, the consumption of fish and chips grew dramatically from nearly 100 grams to 500 grams during a period. Finally, humburger started to rise in 1970 and reached a peak in 1990,from nearly 50 grams to 300 grams.

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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, third, whereas, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61057692308 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33967718118 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.8496829423 43.030603864 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 137.0 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7142857143 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136755797959 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602043433023 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523721248888 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867663539882 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900267153648 0.0819641961636 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.05 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, third, whereas, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments