Analyzing the chart on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and in future projection of 2050, it's clear that in 2000 life expectations in Yemen were much more reduced than in Italy for people between 15 and 59 years and 60+, except for the age range 0-14.
In fact, in countries like Yemen births are more frequent but the life conditions are not always favorable for the children to grow up.
In projection of 2050 is expected to be a change for Yemen: observing the chart infact is possible to see that even if there will be less births than before, the age group from 15 to 59 years will increase reaching 57.3%, overcoming the 46.2% of Italy. In fact Italy, contrarly, will decrease dramatically to 46.2% in 2050, having started from 61.6% in 2000.
At the end the age range of 60+ years remain superior in Italy than Yemen for both 2000 and 2050.
life expectations in Yemen were much more reduced than in Italy
life expectations in Yemen were much more reduced than that in Italy
Sentence: In projection of 2050 is expected to be a change for Yemen: observing the chart infact is possible to see that even if there will be less births than before, the age group from 15 to 59 years will increase reaching 57.3, overcoming the 46.2 of Italy.
Error: infact Suggestion: infant
Sentence: In fact Italy, contrarly, will decrease dramatically to 46.2 in 2050, having started from 61.6 in 2000.
Error: contrarly Suggestion: contrarily
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