The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.
The vertical graph reveals the figure of Japanese tourists who visited overseas period of 10 year. The vertical axis depicts the number of travels in millions whereas horizontal line demonstrates time period in year.
It can be clearly seen that overall trends illustrate that there was massive increased in the number of japanese tourists ovee given time. From 1985 to 1990 the figure of Japanese travellers upsurged from about 5 to 11 millions. The figure of tourists remained constant at 11 million for next 1 year.
Turning to rest of description, The figure of Japanese people who visited experienced and elevating trend, hiking from just below 12 million to 15 millions our next 4 years. As far as comparison is concerned, the number of visitor in 1985 was 5 million whereas it was increased three folds till 1995. moreover, there was less significant increased in the middle year compare to other year.
It is, therefore, clear that number of visitors slowly inclined in the first five years after that it remarkably rose.
period of 10 year.
in a period of 10 year.
there was massive increased in the number of japanese tourists
there was a massive increase in the number of japanese tourists
The figure of Japanese people who visited experienced and elevating trend,
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there was less significant increased in the middle year compare to other year.
there was a less significant increase in the middle year compare to other year.
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