The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared.
write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.
It is very interesting to know why adults now decide to study and how people generally think the tuition fee of adult education should be taken. One survey shows the particular reasons of adults, and it has the percentage of each of them. The smallest one is nine per cent of adult saying they love to meet people in college or campus. The precentage is followed by the number of adult who say that they need to able to change jobs. It is about 12 per cent of them. Quite impressive for 20 per cent who take “enjoy learning/studyng' as a reason. The percentage is truly similar with adults who intend to improve their prospects of promotion by having a better education. There are also adults who have a plan to get a good position in professional world or to acquire a specific qualifications. They show 22 per cent and 38 per cent of respondents. The highest one is the ones who are interested in their subject study.
The other chart talk how the cost should be shared generally, the respondent who were interviewed said every adults has to be responsible individually to their tuition fee. The government just take a small part of responsibility on that. They simplify that 40 per cent of the cost must be taken by the students, and the smallest past, 25 per cent, is paid by government through tax mechanism. The rest is about 35 per cent taken by employer.
they need to able to change jobs
they need to be able to change jobs
to acquire a specific qualifications.
to acquire specific qualifications.
to acquire a specific qualification.
the respondent who were interviewed
the respondents who were interviewed
every adults has to be responsible
every adult has to be responsible
The government just take a small part
The government just takes a small part
Sentence: The precentage is followed by the number of adult who say that they need to able to change jobs.
Error: precentage Suggestion: percentage
Sentence: Quite impressive for 20 per cent who take enjoy learning/studyng' as a reason.
Error: studyng Suggestion: studying
flaws:No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
for task I, you don't need something like:
'It is very interesting to know why adults now decide to study and how people generally think the tuition fee of adult education should be taken.'
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 247 200
No. of Characters: 1094 1000
No. of Different Words: 136 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.964 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.429 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.585 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 64 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 44 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.643 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.597 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.071 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.355 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.427 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.093 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 2 4