These chart shows the results of survey of adult Education. The bar chart represents the reasons why adults decide to study in percentage. The pie chart illustrates how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. The detailed explanation is given below.
From the Bar chart, adults are mostly studying(40%) due to their interest towards subject.To attain a good job,adults are trying to increase qualifications(38%). Some people(22%) are studying because that study while help them for their current job. The people 20% are studying to improve their prospects and for the promotion. The people who enjoy learning study are of 20%. Only 12% and 9% are studying to change their jobs and to meet new people receptively.
From the pie chart, 40% of people are willing to pay their cost of studying by themselves only. Mostly adults, who are studying are already employees.So,35% of people are paying by going jobs. The 25% of people think that taxpayers should share the cost of studying.
because that study while help them for their current job
because that study will help them for their current job
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 10
No. of Words: 169 200
No. of Characters: 799 1000
No. of Different Words: 96 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.606 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.728 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.482 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 56 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 34 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.083 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.645 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.167 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.377 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.558 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.114 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4