The climate graph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

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The climate graph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

The graph reveals the changes of temperatures and precipitation in Kolkata every month.

During January to May, It is cold and dry in Kolkata. The temperature is approximately -15 degree in January and it gradually increased to somewhere around -2 degree. Meanwhile, the rainfall increases from roughly 2400mm to the peak of 300mm.

The temperatures from June to October are the highest in the city, which are the only time that the temperatures are higher than zero degree. In June, the temperature saw a dramatic increase from below zero degree to approximately 22 degrees. Then it peaks at about 38 degree in July before it decreases to around 7 degree in October. During the same Period, the number of rainfall keeps declining from 400 in May to 280mm in October.

The rest of months in Kolkata become colder and dryer. The temperatures plummeted from 28 degree to the lowest point of almost -20 degree. The rainfall dropped from around 28 to 8 degree at the same time.

To summarize, although the temperature and precipitation shows a positive correlation in the majority of months, it is exception for the month from June to August.

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