The diagram below shows career paths in the travel industry. Write a report.
Given is a diagram illustrating the steps which an employee in the travel industry has to take to finally achieve the chief executive post. It is evident from the information provided that there are three main stages involved.
Prior to the beginning of taking occupation as a travel consultant in International Operations, it is first necessary for both travel clerk and travel sales assistant to take over travel consultant position in local country operations.
The second stage of the career paths, meanwhile, entails the responsibility of travel sales supervisors either in commercial privat...
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