The diagram below shows the process of producing construction broicks.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram below shows the process of producing construction broicks.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram supplied illustrates the procedure of production of bricks particularly used for building purposes. One can easily discern a conspicuous feature of the process that it demands out roughly 9 stages to make a brick out of row materials involved.

The process commences when a big digging machine launches its work digging ground to exclude a certain amount of clay from the earth’s surface. Subsequently, the mixture of sand and water is fed either to wire cutter where square-shaped bricks are produced or to the hollow mould which is used to make bricks, too, after the initially supp...

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