The diagrams below show the development of a small fishing village and its surrounding area into a large European tourist resort. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagrams below show the development of a small fishing village and its surrounding area into a large European tourist resort. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Given are two maps illustrating changes which have taken place in a small fishing village after a period of 30 years from 1974 to 2004.

In general. it appears that the old fishing village has become a much more modern and crowded tourist attraction with 80,000 inhabitants and 50,000 tourist beds compared to only 12,000 in 1974.

One interesting change is that a range of hotels have been built to provide accommodations for tourist. As a consequence, the old woodland has been cut down to make way for a new golf course. In 1974, just olives were planted in the area behind the original villa...

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Sentence: Another striking change is that a new road linking two residental areas has been constructed.
Error: residental Suggestion: No alternate word

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