The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
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This first diagrams shows the process and tools needed to produce cement, while the second diagram illustrates how to make a concrete out of cement for building and housing work. It can be seen that, creating cement involves complex processes and concrete production is done using, water, cement, gravel, sand and a mixer.
To begin the cement-making process the limestone and clay crushed together by a crusher to formed powder. Then the powder passed through a mixer and goes directly to a rotating small turbine with constant heat, this process creates the raw cement material to be passed on a grinder to finally produce the cement. Finally, the cement is ready to packed and sell.
The second diagram presents how a cement is made for concrete production. In the first stage, the 15% cement, 10% water, quarter sand and 50% of small stones or gravel are poured together in a concrete mixer. Then the machine rotates very fast to produce concrete.
the limestone and clay crushed together by a crusher to formed powder.
the limestone and clay are crushed together by a crusher to form powder.
Sentence: Finally, the cement is ready to packed and sell.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and packed
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