The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following diagrams present the phase and tools which are used in the process of making cement, and how cement used to make a concrete for building purpose. It is clear from diagrams that concrete-making process is shorter than cement-making process.
To begin, limestone and clay which act as basic ingridients are crushed to result powder. Then, this will be mixed and will be melt into rotating heater. Constantly refining to produce cement, it it grinded to produce cement. Finally, the cement will be packed using the bags and then cement ready to use and to sell in the stores.
A more detailed look at the chart shows how the process concrete production used cement. Based on the formula of concrete production, we need proportion of cement and water which are in 15% and 10%. In addition, we added a quarter of sands and half of gravel proportion. To the final stages, all ingriedients are mixed in concret mixed as the first as well as the last step of the concrete production.
Sentence: Constantly refining to produce cement, it it grinded to produce cement.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to it and it
and how cement used to make a concrete
and how cement is used to make a concrete
will be melt into rotating heater
will be melt into a rotating heater
and then cement ready to use and to sell in the stores.
and then cement is ready to use and to sell in the stores.
Sentence: To begin, limestone and clay which act as basic ingridients are crushed to result powder.
Error: ingridients Suggestion: ingredients
Sentence: Constantly refining to produce cement, it it grinded to produce cement.
Error: grinded Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: To the final stages, all ingriedients are mixed in concret mixed as the first as well as the last step of the concrete production.
Error: concret Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: ingriedients Suggestion: ingredients
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