The following diagrams show a current map of Peyton Park and a plan for proposed changes

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The following diagrams show a current map of Peyton Park and a plan for proposed changes.

The first map illustrates Payton Park now, while the second one is a propose about possible changes, which can be done at the park.

Firstly, in the centre of the park there is a lake. In addition, to the South of the park there is a large parking lot, while to the East side a tennis court is present. Finally, people can take advantage of a picnic area with tables and chairs, to the North.

The plan for proposed changes shows a few of differences. The tennis court, in fact, would be to the West of the lake and the picnic area would locate near the court, always to the North zone. A swimming dock would be added to the East side of the lake, and moreover, an area with some games for children would built to the North region of the park just between the picnic area and the lake.

However, the location of the parking lot would not be changed, indeed, it would be able to the South, just under the lake. In conclusion, the buildings would remain pretty the same, but a swimming dock and an area for children would be added in the new project.

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an area with some games for children would be built

it would be able to the South,
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