Dear Heena,
I received your house warming invitation card by post yesterday. Thank you so much for inviting me to your new home in Dubai. Fortunately, I have a conference to attend during the same time so I will be able to make it as I have extended my trip through the weekend. I'm so excited to meet you as it has been almost a year since we last met.
Life has been so busy but fortunately such occasions gives an opportunity to meet friends. I still remember the crazy outings we had. I can never forget your obsession with Bengali sweets and makeup. You know I won't come empty hand to your house, so I need your opinion on what to bring for you and your family. I know your mother loves keeping antiques in the house and everyone loves Bengali sweets, so I leave it on you to decide and let me know.
Since I am coming for the first time to Dubai, I wanted to know what arrangements I would need to do before I leave. I'm unsure about the weather right now, so please suggest what type of clothes would be preferable for the climate out there. Also, since I will be there for the weekend, I also need options of activities that I can do during that time. As Dubai is popular for non vegetarian food, it would be great if you could let me know about places where vegetarian food is served.
I will be waiting for your reply.
Your dearest friend,
Kriti
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...e extended my trip through the weekend. Im so excited to meet you as it has been a...
^^
Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ents I would need to do before I leave. Im unsure about the weather right now, so ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 5.60731707317 803% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 259.0 196.424390244 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30888030888 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31487709247 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 106.607317073 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583011583012 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9104622326 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273979883516 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938274707908 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702013335616 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160284523649 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504052310393 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 11.4140731707 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...e extended my trip through the weekend. Im so excited to meet you as it has been a...
^^
Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ents I would need to do before I leave. Im unsure about the weather right now, so ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 5.60731707317 803% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 259.0 196.424390244 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30888030888 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31487709247 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 106.607317073 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583011583012 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9104622326 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273979883516 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938274707908 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702013335616 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160284523649 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504052310393 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 11.4140731707 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.