The graph below shows the weekday volume of passenger activity on the Toronto Metro system for July 2007 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The graph below shows the weekday volume of passenger activity on the Toronto Metro system for July 2007

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph illustrates the activity of surplus passenger on the Toronto Metro System for the year 2007 in the month of July.

Overall,it is immediately apparent from the graph that maximum number of people shows the activity at 8 in the morning and 6 in the evening.

To begin,the x-axis highlights the time of the day and y-axis reflects the number of people travel. The activity at Toronto Metro Station starts at 6 in the morning and accounted as minimum rush of 100 people and fairly similar pattern can be noticed at 4 in the evening. There was a modest rise and steadily rose up to maximum of 400 people at 8 am and same was recorded for 6 in the evening. Further,with the passage of time , there was a drastic downfall and reached to about 200 people at 10 in the morning.

Moving further,after a climb to 12 in noon,interestingly,there was a stabilization till 2 PM and a sharp rise up to 4 PM. However,from 8 to 10 PM,the number of people does not crosses over 200.Hence,the maximum number of people registered were in the morning and in the evening whereas there was a volatile performance significantly.

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surplus passenger on the Toronto Metro System
surplus passengers on the Toronto Metro System

the number of people does not crosses over 200
the number of people does not cross over 200

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Didn't depict well for the time 'from 8 to 10 PM'

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