The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the number of residents travelling abroad and visiting to UK from 1979 to 1999 while the bar chart gives demonstrates five most common countries visited by UK residents in the year 1999.
Overall, as can be seen from the line graph, the number of travelers visiting to the UK and abroad increased significantly. Meanwhile, France was the most popular destination for Britain visitors, the opposite was true for Turkey.
According to the line graph, in 1979, the number of UK visitors going abroad was about 12 millions, which was a bit higher than the figure for overseas residents going to UK with 10 millions. By the next 20 years, these figures increased to over 50 millions and nearly 30 millions of people visiting abroad and visiting to the UK respectively.
In 1999, France was the most attractive country for UK travelers with over 10 millions, followed by 9 millions of Spain. The amount of residents travelling to Greece was 3 millions, comparison to approximately 4 millions. The least common for Britain visitors was Turkey with only 2 millions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '30 million'.
Suggestion: 30 million
...ncreased to over 50 millions and nearly 30 millions of people visiting abroad and visiting to ...
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Line 4, column 101, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '9 million'.
Suggestion: 9 million
...lers with over 10 millions, followed by 9 millions of Spain. The amount of residents travelli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97802197802 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83565461312 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521978021978 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9047603267 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.25 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308295351886 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146315599965 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137111805617 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227984054679 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139391908939 0.0819641961636 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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