the map below show the village of stokeford in1930 and 2010. summarise the information and make comparison where relevant.
The map illustrates about the changes took place in Stokford village over the given period of 80 years.
It is clearly seen that, river stoke was on the same place in both the time period. Farmland was converted into que of houses in the north east-direction as well as west-south direction. The post office remained same over the given period. The primary school was modified in 2010 with 2 more buildings. The garden area was finished and the large house was converted into Retirement home.
The map depicts that, as far as comparison is concerned,in 1930, there was large area for farmland bu...
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