The map below shows three proposed sites for a new hypermarket (A, B and C) in the city of Pellington.
The map below illustrates three main possible sites for the new hypermarket in the city of Pellington. When you look at the map it can be seen that all sites are located in different parts of the city.
Site A is located inside of the residential. In detail, if chosen are is here, that time the hypermarket will place intersection of industrial area and traffic-free zone and also railway runs next to site A. Moving on to Site B which is located North West of the map, not inside of the residential area and if the new hypermarket is here, therefore the market will be next to the motorway.
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Site A is located inside of the residential
Site A is located inside a residential area
if chosen are is here, that time the hypermarket will place intersection of industrial area and traffic-free zone and also railway runs next to site A.
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which is located North West of the map
which is located at North West of the map
site C is located south of the city
site C is located south of the city
distance is approximately same between airport and sites for both of the sites.
Description: can you re-write this sentence? it is not clear.
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