People in your area are having problems wit their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter . Describe the problems , Explain how they are affecting people, say what the company should do to help,
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to show my dissatisfaction about the service you are providing. Since from last week (12/01/2015) we are getting problem to connect to the your service because of that people in this area getting problems to access to the internet and apart from that if it connected it no longer exist for not more than 10 minutes. And also the signal strength is very low and which is always showing as WCDMA.
As you already know most of the people are relay on internet to do their jobs and they are connecting with different countries and the worst case is when ...
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it no longer exist
it no longer exists
most of the people are relay on internet
most of the people are relaying on internet
in our area most of the residents doing the online jobs
in our area most of the residents are doing the online jobs
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
Sentence Length SD: 20.089 7.5 //sentences are not developed smoothly
No. of Words: 220 200
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Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 220 200
No. of Characters: 999 1000
No. of Different Words: 142 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.851 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.541 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.355 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 64 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 43 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 23 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.444 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 20.089 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.444 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.327 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.797 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.166 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4