The pie charts below give information about world population in 1900 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts below give information about world population in 1900 and 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given pie charts illustrate the percentage of residents of the world by different countries for one century.

As is shown by graph, although the percentage of population decreased from 60% in 1900 to 54% in 2000, the largest proportion of population was in Asia Pacific over the last century. There was almost double decrease in the percentage of Europeans between 1990 and 2000. While 25% of people were in Europe in 1900, the rate of population dipped to 14% in 2002. Differ from these countries , there were significant rises in the percentage of other countries. Namely, in 1900 only 3% of ...

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Sentence: It is clear from the pie chat that there was no change in the percentage of North America during this period, bur generally, the number of world population increased sharply over the one century from 1.6 billion in 1900 to 6 billion in 2000.
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