Problem with road in your area.Write a letter to the concil Introduce yourself Explain the problem What action you would like to take.

Essay topics: Problem with road in your area.
Write a letter to the concil
Introduce yourself
Explain the problem
What action you would like to take.

prathapreddy's picture

Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to bring to your attention of a road maintenance condition just behind my house on King street.

My name is Prathap, i have been a resident at number 250 , King street, Bangalore for over 10 years. I have never had any reason to complain to council until now.

Recently, there is a pothole appeared on the side of the road in the closest to my house. When it rains, the pothole will fill-up with water and becomes as an invisible danger to the drivers and also it is an eyesore to the residents of the vicinity.

I have complained the same to the council office couple of times over telephone, but still the problem exists. I would like to request your personal attention on this matter and make sure to take it as a priority by the road maintenance department.

I look forward to the issue being resolved.

Yours faithfully,
Prathap

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No. of Different Words: 100 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.545 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.342 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.426 2.4
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.412 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.3 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.363 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.836 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.056 0.07
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