On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:
• Describe the item you lost
• Explain how you lost it.
• Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear James,
Recently, I had a pleasure trip with my family in Kuakata sea beach, which is the place from where sun rise and sun set views can easily be enjoyed. Anyway, a very unusual incident happened during the expedition. One of my favorite valuable items, iPod, I have lost it unconsciously. My gadget’s manufacturing company name is Apple Inc USA, IMEA number is IEA201234532W and the color is white.
At the evening, I and my wife sat down on the beach bench to enjoy the marvelous sun setting view. Before that I had kept my iPod on the corner of the seat. The beach was not so rush place because of off season. Suddenly, my attention backed on my electronic device and I did not see it in the place. Most possibly a thief committed his job.
However, I made a general diary in the local police station. Please be informed that I have a travel insurance agreement under your company. Such type of event I never experienced. So, I need a help from you. Could you please guide me, how I will submit my insurance claim to your company for my lost item?
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours.
Arif
I and my wife sat down on the beach...
my wife and I sat down on the beach...
The beach was not so rush place
The beach was not a very rush place
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