The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows data on different means of transportation in England from 1985 to 2000.While bicycle,local bus and walking decreased in popularity,car and other mode of travel continued to be people's most common choice.
It is evident that car is the most popular transportation in both 1985 and 2000.The distance covered by car increased approximately 1600 miles over the 15-year period.However,the rise in the average distance traveled by taxi was the most significant,being three times as it was in 1985.Long distance bus,train and other means of transportation also gained popularity,though on...
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 4 10
No. of Words: 176 200
No. of Characters: 858 1000
No. of Different Words: 103 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.642 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.875 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.704 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 56 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 29 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 44 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 19.261 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.584 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 1 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.154 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4