The Table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
This table indicates the percentages of a consumer on a particular items divided into three columns in different five countries by the year 2002.
To begin with, Turkey is the highest percentages among the rest in five countries. Except by the categories of clothing and footwear. Food, drinks and tabacco is the primarily basic need in Turkey and second in Ireland. Spain got 18.80% and Italy 16.36%. In this first column Sweden has a lowest percentages which is 15.75%. Moreover, Second column is clothing and footwear. Turkey got the highest percentages about 9.00% and followed by Turkey 6.63%. Furthermore in Spain and Ireland are too close in ranking by consuming of clothing and footwear. Sweden as well has a lowest percentages about 5.40% respectively.
In third column, Turkey got the biggest rate with around 4.35% followed by Sweden and Italy which is 2% different. Ireland and Spain showed the lowest percentages.
In conclusion, the highest percentages among the three items is for food, drinks and tabacco. The consumer spent little money for leisure and education.
Turkey is the highest percentages
Turkey has the highest percentages
tabacco is the primarily basic need
tabacco is primarily the basic need
Turkey got the highest percentages about 9.00% and followed by Turkey 6.63%.
Italy got the highest percentages about 9.00% and followed by Turkey 6.63%.
Furthermore in Spain and Ireland are too close
Furthermore in Spain and Ireland, they are too close
Sentence: In this first column Sweden has a lowest percentages which is 15.75.
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Sentence: Sweden as well has a lowest percentages about 5.40 respectively.
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Sentence: Food, drinks and tabacco is the primarily basic need in Turkey and second in Ireland.
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Sentence: In conclusion, the highest percentages among the three items is for food, drinks and tabacco.
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