The table below shows the figures (in thousand) for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980.Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The table below shows the figures (in thousand) for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

A glance at the bar chart provided elucidates the data on the figures of incarceration in five major states namely Great Britain, Australia, New Zealand, United States and Canada over an interim of half a century from 1930 to 1980. It is apparent, although erratic the trends for almost all patterns remained on the plateau.

As is observed from the graph, evident is the fact that United Kingdom, owing the minimum quantity of imprisoned videlicet a mere 30 thousands at the outset, witnessed a moderate accretion of almost 300% reaching its pinnacle of 80000 culprits in 1980. As for the pr...

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