The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table compares the percentages of market shares of the top laptop companies in the world for a period of two years.

It is clear that HP was the most popular manufacturer, followed by Dell in the years 2006 and 2007. By contrast, Fujitsu-Siemens had the least market share for the notebook computer, which was ranked sixth over the same period.

In 2006, HP achieved a dominant position in the world market, with 31.4% market share, and Dell was ranked second, at 16.6%. Acer had 11.6% market share, while Toshiba and Lenovo each took just under 7%. The least popular manufacturer compared to the other six companies was Fujitsu-Siemens, with 4.8 market share. The market proportion of other unknown brands stood at 22.8%.

Between 2006 and 2007, the only three brands, HP, Dell and Toshiba, saw a rise in the share between 1% and 4%. Acer and Lenovo lost 0.9% and 0.4% during the same period, respectively. Fujitsu-Siemens still had the lowest market share, at 2.3% in 2013. Other manufacturers lost their shares by 3.5% in the same year.

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