The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

There are two tables that give us information about sales of two kinds of fair-trade, such as coffee and bananas among five European countries: UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden. Both are the data from 1999 and 2004.

In 1999, the biggest member of sales of coffee among these five countries was Switzerland by 3 millions of euros. Another country who had sold the big number of coffee was Denmark by 1.8 millions of euros, than followed by UK on 1.5 millions of euros. The last was followed by Belgium by 1 million of euros and Sweden by 0.8 million of euros. On the other hand, the biggest number of bananas sales was also Switzerland by 15 millions of euros, than followed by Denmark on 2 millions of euros, Sweden by 1.8 millions of euros, UK by 1 million of euro and the last was Belgium by 0.6 million of Euros.

In 2004, there were some significant changes in coffee sales. The biggest amount of coffee sales was UK by 20 millions of euros, and followed by Switzerland on 6 millions of euros, Denmark on 2 millions of Euros, Belgium on 1.7 millions of euros and the last Sweden by 1 million of euros. Moreover, there were also some changes in bananas sales in 2004, but the biggest amount was still hold by Switzerland by 47 millions of euros. Besides, the arrangement had changed by UK in the second position on 5.5 millions of euros, and followed by Belgium on 4 millions of euros, Sweden 1 million of euros and lastly Denmark by 0.9 millions of euros.

In sum up, there were some changes in coffee sales between 1999 and 2004, the biggest amount sales in 1999 Switzerland was surpassed by UK in 2004. While the biggest amount in bananas sales between 1999 and 2004 was remain held by Switzerland.

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Write the essay in 20 minutes. don't need to put a lot of percentages. read the topic again:

'Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant...'

for example, for banana sales, only Belgium and Sweden have declined sales.

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