The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

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The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

The bar charts demonstrate how the expenditure (per annum) on a specific school in the UK has undergone transformations in three different years.

In 1981, the wages of the teachers constituted 40% of the expenses. This amount, after 10 years, increased slightly by 10% and then in 2001, declined to 45%. In addition, in 1981, the spending on insurance accounted for a mere 2% of the expenditure, and this figure, by 2001, had risen marginally to 8%. Moreover, the spending on resources, in 1981, comprised 15% of the expenditure and this amount, in 1991, grew to 20% and eventually, in 2001, shrank to 9%. Besides, other workers' salaries had always been on the decline, from 28% in 1981 to 15% in 2001. Also, the expenditure of the furniture and equipment, in 1981, made up 15% of the spending and since then this percentage has experienced a fall (5%) and a rise (23%) in 1991 and 2001 respectively.

Overall, since 1981 the annual expenditure of the school in the UK has experienced some moderate changes.

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