Write to an English speaking college about qualification, accommodation, fee, what courses do you want to choose and why.

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Write to an English speaking college about qualification, accommodation, fee, what courses do you want to choose and why.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I writing to you this letter to get qualification requirement and which kind of facilities can be provided by your collage.

Firstly, I am Tejmal Mali from India. I completed my Diploma In Mechanical Engineering from Indian Government engineering collage. Nowadays, I am working in the private sector as an engineer. I want to interest further study in your collage. So that my bag to request to you that let me know what is the minimum qualification and also another English language skill required for enrollment or admission? Which kind of the accommodation and facilities could be provided by collage? What is the fee structure of collage and accommodation?

I want to study bachelor degree in Mechanical stream. My aim will work in big technology empire and utilize my technical knowledge. But, all are this possible after completion of a bachelor degree.

I hope that you would provide all details soon.

Thank You,

Tejmal

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I writing to you this letter
I am writing to you this letter

So that my bag to request to you
So that I beg to request to you

all are this possible after completion of a bachelor degree
all are possible after the completion of a bachelor degree

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