Write a letter to a book shop manager about a book you’re looking for, ask him to find the book and send it to you.

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Write a letter to a book shop manager about a book you’re looking for, ask him to find the book and send it to you.

Dear Mr. Simi,

My name is Pip Depp and I am pursuing Master of information System in Griffith University. I am writing this letter to request for one of the book that I could not find in yours branch in Nathan Campus.

The book I am talking about is “The story Of Internet” by R.K.M.Narius. I am after its special current edition III, which is unfortunately, not available in Coopers branch in Nathan. I got yours reference form the same branch and I am expecting that now you are the one who could help me to find this particular edition of the book. Could you please do this for me?

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request for one of the book
request for one of the books

I got yours reference form the same branch
I got your reference from the same branch

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 10
No. of Words: 202 200
No. of Characters: 854 1000
No. of Different Words: 119 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.77 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.228 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.39 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 49 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 33 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 23 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.467 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.079 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.133 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.36 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.65 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.145 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4