Write a letter to your company manager saying that you want to leave the company. Please sayWhat have you learned while working for the company?Did you enjoy working there?What are your reasons for leaving?You should write at least 150 words.You do not ne

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Write a letter to your company manager saying that you want to leave the company. Please say

What have you learned while working for the company?

Did you enjoy working there?

What are your reasons for leaving?
You should write at least 150 words.

You do not need to write your own address.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to inform about my resignation from the company since I am going to pursue my higher studies. But I have learnt a lot from this company.

In the five years that I have spent here, I have learnt about the leadership skills. Secondly, I was also able to acquire knowledge about how to work under pressure situations and finally, how to maintain a clear timetable for a day. I thoroughly enjoyed all my days with the company. I really had a very great time. But unfortunately I have to leave. I always had in my mind to do a Masters degree and at last I received an offer letter from a Australian University. Because of this, I have to leave India in two months. Also I need some time to file my visa papers as it takes more time. Additionally, I have to do some shopping. Therefore, keeping all these things in mind I am submitting my resignation. I hope you can understand my situation and act accordingly. Kindly do the needful.

Thank you

Yours sincerely

Santhosh Raghavan

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More sentences varieties wanted. Look, a lot of sentences start with subject 'I'.

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 10
No. of Words: 180 200
No. of Characters: 801 1000
No. of Different Words: 112 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.688 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.33 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.65 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 51 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 36 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 24 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 10.278 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.309 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.389 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.35 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.596 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.121 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4