you are due to start a new job next week but you will bot be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter
-explain your situation
-describe your problems
-tell him/her when you think you can start.
Dear Sir,
My name is Kulwinder Paul and I am writing this letter to inform you that I was going to join the new post in your reputed Institute but because of some obstacles I could not join that opportunity. I want to extend my joining time period.
As I was going to join job in your organization on 12th Jan but owing to some circumstances I could not come as I shifted to new house in your city recently and my family is also with me so to manage all requirement according to their house I have to take some days to manage everything.
I know that it was big opportunity for my life to gain this job and I don’t want to miss that so please try to cooperate to me according to my situation and I will be thankful to you for your understanding.
Waiting for your positive response. I hope you will not disappoint to me.
Date: 16-Jan-2015
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flaws:
You missed: 'tell him/her when you think you can start.'
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 163 200
No. of Characters: 665 1000
No. of Different Words: 93 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.573 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.08 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.631 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 34 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 26 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.375 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 20.561 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.375 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.405 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.855 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.186 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4