You have been doing some voluntary work too help your local community. However ,now you are unable to continue doing this work.
Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working. In your letter
Describe the work you have been doing.
Explain why you can no longer do this work.
Recommend another person who is interesting in the work.
Dear sir,
I’m S.P Rathmayake who is working as a voluntary teacher in your organization under KG456 registration number in Uva province, Monaragala District. I have been working since 2011 in your organization as a teacher for disable students in the area.
I hereby to inform you that, I’m unable to continue my charity work furthermore. I have moved to Colombo from last Friday due to unavoidable circumstance. So I won’t be able to continue my class. This makes me really disappointed as it makes me more fascinating and more fruitful work. It has much beneficial effect on the society. And also it is a memorable experience in my whole life.
I much regret for the inconveniences you faced. I take in pleasure to recommend you a teacher K.P Suwinitha who is interested in working as a voluntary teacher in your organization. If you want some further details, don’t hesitate to contact me.
Thank you,
Your’ sincerely
Shanika Rthnayaka.
for disable students in the area.
for disabled students in the area.
due to unavoidable circumstance
due to an unavoidable circumstance
as it makes me more fascinating and more fruitful work.
as it makes me more fascinating and fruitful on the work.
as it makes me more fascinating and fruitful.
It has much beneficial effect on the society.
It has a much beneficial effect on the society.
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