You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before.You have a friend who lives there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
1) Explain your situation
2) Say why you feel unsure about living in the city
3) Ask some question about life in the city.
Dear varun,
How are you? Hope you are doing well.
As you know about my current job in Oman. I am well settled here with my wife. She is also working here in a well reputed hospital. You are also know, I was planning to change my current job. I got a good offer from XX company situated in Qatar. They are offering me a handsome package too.
I know you are working in Qatar from last few years and hope you are well aware about the culture, life style and safety of that country. Currently, I am here in Oman in a Good position at work place. Actually , I am promoted to Sr. Manager last year only. A you well known to that place and company. I greatly required your assistance in that.
Kindly reply to the few question mention herewith,
1) Please tell, How is the environment there?
2) Are wife’s are able to job there? If yes then what is probability to get job there? She is a dentist and having 3 Years of work Experience in Oman.
3) I will be waiting to know the best reply from your end. Please revert as soon as possible.
Your’s Obediently
Joginder Pal
A you well known to that place and company
As you are well known to that place and company
Kindly reply to the few question mention herewith,
Kindly reply to following few questions mentioned herewith,
Are wife’s are able to job there?
Are wives able to work there?
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Words: 204 200
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No. of Different Words: 118 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.779 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.044 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.192 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 35 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 19 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 6 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 5.202 7.5
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.14 0.07
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