You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
Explain why you have moved
Describe the new house
Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Garry,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I am writing in regard to inform you that recently I have shifted to new house which is situated at Whitehall road. Allow me to describe more information for you.
First of all, as you know, I have found a new job as a Sales Manager in Hero Private Limited company. Thus, they offered me to get a new habitation which is just 5 miles away from organization. Therefore, I left my previous apartment and moved to this home. Additionally, it has four well-furnished bedrooms, well-equipped kitchen, two washrooms and a one marvelous living room. In addition, it has also supernatural garden with green lush grass on back side of the habitation.
However, I would greatly appreciate if u could visit to my new sweet home with family on this coming weekend. I hope we will enjoy a lot do fun with each other.
I am eagerly waiting for you.
With lots of love,
Rae
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Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.6 4.0
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