You have recently started a new job. Write a letter to your friends to tell them about it and invite them for an evening meal.
- Describe how you feel about the job.
- Give directions to a meeting place.
- Give suggestions on where to stay, if he is coming from a different city
Dear Rahul,
How are you? Hope you are doing well. It is almost a year since we met personally. If I am not wrong, last time we met in a Christmas party organized by Christy our common friend. The reason why I am writing to you now is to inform you that I had recently joined Google.
As you are aware I have been looking for a change since last 6 months and fortunately I got an offer from Google to work on the position of a Project Manager. There are couples of reasons why I like my new job in Google. Firstly, working environment is awesome and company gives me an opportunity to work from home for 2 days a week. Secondly, all the colleagues and my immediate reporting manager are really supportive and helpful.
To celebrate this occasion, I would like to invite you for an evening meal with me on the weekend. Probably; if you are coming by a metro rail, I would suggest you get down at XYZ station and from there you can take a cab and ask for old Arthur road to reach to Bombay Dreams Indian Restaurant. As currently I am living in 2 bedrooms flat you can live with me and together we can explore my city.
I am looking forward to hearing soon from you. In case if you have any problem reaching here, please do give me a call on my mobile.
Regards
Rohan.
It is almost a year since we met personally.
It has been a year since we met personally.
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