You rented a car from a Car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired.Write a letter to the company. In your letter - introduce yourself - explain the situation - say what

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You rented a car from a Car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired.

Write a letter to the company. In your letter
- introduce yourself
- explain the situation
- say what action you would like to company to take.

Dear sir/Madam,

I am one of your customer who rented BMW car for two months. Unfortunetly car air conditioner has not working, so I phoned to your company and one of your representive told me it will repaired in two days but its almost a week no one come for repair.

As you know I am on summer hioliday for two months so I rented car from your company. it was working properly for few days an dsuddenly one day it has stopped working. That day i went to the beach and when we were returning from the beach it has stopped working. It was very enconevience for me and my family. We all were tired and temprature was also high.I was really surprised to discovered that very expensive model stopped working.

Naturally, I want another car to replace this one, because nobody has come to repair air conditioning. it is impossible for me to use this car without air conditioner.I prefer replacment insted of repair.

I am very unstisfied with your service and relly wanted to replkace the car.

Yours faithfully,
sejal

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Average: 5.5 (2 votes)

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I am one of your customer
I am one of your customers

Unfortunetly car air conditioner has not working,
Unfortunetly car air conditioner is not working,

I phoned to your company and one of your representive told me it will repaired
I phoned to your company and one of your representives told me it will be repaired

but its almost a week no one come for repair.
but it's almost a week no one came for repairing.

very expensive model stopped working.
very expensive model has stopped working.

I was really surprised to discovered that very expensive model stopped working.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and discovered

Sentence: Unfortunetly car air conditioner has not working, so I phoned to your company and one of your representive told me it will repaired in two days but its almost a week no one come for repair.
Error: representive Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: As you know I am on summer hioliday for two months so I rented car from your company. it was working properly for few days an dsuddenly one day it has stopped working.
Error: hioliday Suggestion: holiday
Error: dsuddenly Suggestion: suddenly

Sentence: It was very enconevience for me and my family.
Error: enconevience Suggestion: ?

Sentence: We all were tired and temprature was also high.I was really surprised to discovered that very expensive model stopped working.
Error: temprature Suggestion: temperature

Sentence: Naturally, I want another car to replace this one, because nobody has come to repair air conditioning. it is impossible for me to use this car without air conditioner.I prefer replacment insted of repair.
Error: replacment Suggestion: replacement
Error: insted Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: I am very unstisfied with your service and relly wanted to replkace the car.
Error: relly Suggestion: rely
Error: unstisfied Suggestion: unsatisfied
Error: replkace Suggestion: replace

flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 10 2

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.0 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 10 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 186 200
No. of Characters: 809 1000
No. of Different Words: 107 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.693 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.349 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.574 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 53 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 37 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.901 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.3 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.391 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.783 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.185 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4