Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this.
Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain
1. Why you are writing to them
2. Why you think the insurance should not be increased
3. What you want them to do
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this to you as I received a letter from you informing me that insurance premium for my car is going to increase from next month.
As you aware if check you records, I have held insurance in your company last seven years now. During this period I have never made any accident and never had any reason to make a claim on my insurance.
I understand that at times prices need to be increased. However this increase you are suggesting will result is 20% increase in the amount which I pay every month. A rate I feel it is too high.
I would therefore like you t...
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I will have no other option but to move some other insurance company.
I will have no other options but move to some other insurance companies.
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